Thread: Workers People's Party aka The National Integralist Movement

Hi guys Iwould just like to bring your attention to a new party/movement on the sceneand would like your feedback. It's called the Workers People's Party aka TheNational Integralist Movement and the website is located at:The Workers People's Party
I know thesite is not perfect as well as probably the structure of the information within the site but what Iam looking for is only constructive criticism not silly remarks. Thanks.

There is a speaker in the top left click it.

constructive criticism not silly remarks. Thanks.

You joined this forum specifically to post about your party, you are not in a position to be demanding anything, and with that attitude... so I am just going to say what somebody else would eventually. You want constructive feedback? How does one do that for something that is not itself a constructive effort?

It is very clear when you look at it that you have built this website as an aspiring political party, though despite walls of text it is not well designed at all. The sheer amount of text on the site is very betraying of all the problems. Let me explain; You have no indication of where the stuff happens, all the text (even if people agree with all of it) is just posponing the question of how you actually go about doing that, 'what is it that you are doing now'.

I might add, that if you aspire only to be a writer, then you don't have any control over the english language, passages like this are just a diarrhea of completely pointless words that sound like marketing.

The only way that a party can come to power is to have the majority of members in the House of Commons. It follows, therefore, that the major effort and the majority of resources available should be expended to that aim, of course after gradual success at local. It will no doubt take colossal sums of money and millions of hour's effort for all of those.

This does not even get into all the unscrupulous political phrases; empty promises that drip with insincerity. 'Grass roots' applies only to an actual grass roots organisation, you are a man behind a keyboard. Not that there is anything wrong with that, it would be a funny world if everyone was a grass roots organisation.

If you want constructive criticism stop treating people like they are simple idiots, people recognise when somebody is trying to manipulate them. It is autistic. These 'pledges' about how you are going to clean up the environment, ice cream and strawberries for everyone, just make everything better, so on and so on, is just so insulting to anyone reading it because it is a programme you clearly never intend to have carried out - and could never be carried out. Britain is not dying because of lack of programmes, it is dying because of lack of action.

As this is an ego project it depends what you want. If you only desire the priveledge of leadership without the desire to do anything yourself then carry on as you are, I don't think anyone is going to bother you, I would personally make that promise to you. You might get a naieve teenager, but people are not so stupid as this. Why not test yourself and participate in another organisation; if you can't cut it as a member, then you certainly are not fit to be a leader. I mean I did get this right? this isn't just an ethos you are peddling, you want people to support you so you can get to public office.

"Am I a natural leader? I think so, I have often been elected leader throughout my life by my peers in various situations I don't seek it or have not always necessarily desire it but I have now been called to do this honourable thing, will I be successful who knows, but what I do know is this, that I will give it all I got, 110%."
Citing this electoral history would be a start? what were you elected as? are you a union leader? A counciller? a class president?

Give up, go home, start an arts course, take up fishing, carry on as you were, - what do I care? I am just saying you are wasting your time.

Originally Posted by Benjamin Noyles

You joined this forum specifically to post about your party, you are not in a position to be demanding anything, and with that attitude... so I am just going to say what somebody else would eventually. You want constructive feedback? How does one do that for something that is not itself a constructive effort?

It is very clear when you look at it that you have built this website as an aspiring political party, though despite walls of text it is not well designed at all. The sheer amount of text on the site is very betraying of all the problems. Let me explain; You have no indication of where the stuff happens, all the text (even if people agree with all of it) is just posponing the question of how you actually go about doing that, 'what is it that you are doing now'.

I might add, that if you aspire only to be a writer, then you don't have any control over the english language, passages like this are just a diarrhea of completely pointless words that sound like marketing.

This does not even get into all the unscrupulous political phrases; empty promises that drip with insincerity. 'Grass roots' applies only to an actual grass roots organisation, you are a man behind a keyboard. Not that there is anything wrong with that, it would be a funny world if everyone was a grass roots organisation.

If you want constructive criticism stop treating people like they are simple idiots, people recognise when somebody is trying to manipulate them. It is autistic. These 'pledges' about how you are going to clean up the environment, ice cream and strawberries for everyone, just make everything better, so on and so on, is just so insulting to anyone reading it because it is a programme you clearly never intend to have carried out - and could never be carried out. Britain is not dying because of lack of programmes, it is dying because of lack of action.

As this is an ego project it depends what you want. If you only desire the priveledge of leadership without the desire to do anything yourself then carry on as you are, I don't think anyone is going to bother you, I would personally make that promise to you. You might get a naieve teenager, but people are not so stupid as this. Why not test yourself and participate in another organisation; if you can't cut it as a member, then you certainly are not fit to be a leader. I mean I did get this right? this isn't just an ethos you are peddling, you want people to support you so you can get to public office.

"Am I a natural leader? I think so, I have often been elected leader throughout my life by my peers in various situations I don't seek it or have not always necessarily desire it but I have now been called to do this honourable thing, will I be successful who knows, but what I do know is this, that I will give it all I got, 110%."
Citing this electoral history would be a start? what were you elected as? are you a union leader? A counciller? a class president?

Give up, go home, start an arts course, take up fishing, carry on as you were, - what do I care? I am just saying you are wasting your time.

And i suppose this joke is better lol.
http://integralistparty.zzl.org/
I am not here to fight with you Ben. Just leave it at that. Oh I and bythe way thanks for your critique even if it is from you I might be able to takesomething from it.

Originally Posted by NewDawn

Hi guys Iwould just like to bring your attention to a new party/movement on the sceneand would like your feedback. It's called the Workers People's Party aka TheNational Integralist Movement and the website is located at:The Workers People's Party
I know thesite is not perfect as well as probably the structure of the information within the site but what Iam looking for is only constructive criticism not silly remarks. Thanks.

What nation does the National Integralist Movement cover? The Workers Peoples Party, MMMM how very MARX sounding.

Originally Posted by paralreg

What nation does the National Integralist Movement cover? The Workers Peoples Party, MMMM how very MARX sounding.

The one I live in and if you go to the site you will see what we stand for. Sounding and being is 2 different things.